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i wish i coud make you love me
like i want you too
like you mean it

i hate begin second rate
without you by my side
sitting next to you
seperated by your resentment

i wish i could inspire more from you
i wish i could make you believe
there is some value in me

there is something more that youre not saying
through you lash wickedly
with all the hurtful things you can contrive
you use that something to widen the divide

dont say what you dont mean
dont patronise, dont be so damn snide
you cant justify the holes in the wall, in my pride

dont cut me down
dont bite and spit with those serpant fangs
dont cut me down again
you will know what you had when you feel the phantom pangs
©2007-2009 ~passive-contagious
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Author's Comments

im having a bad day.

there are some missmatchy rymes i just noticed.

whatev.

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Nice D....i love the phantom pangs at the end....very visual

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--
....for me there is only the traveling on the paths that have a heart,
on any path that may have a heart.
There I travel, and the only worthwhile challenge for me is to traverse its full length....looking, looking, breathlessly.

~Carlos Castaneda

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